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1 Sửa bài viết giùm em on Wed Jan 19, 2011 9:40 pm

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Tình hình là thế này: Ngày mai em có phải thuyết trình về topic : TV and its pros and cons mà em thì mới viết được có chút đỉnh, vậy post vào đây, mong anh chị nào giúp em với để em có bài trình bày
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Đây là bài viết của em, hic








Nowadays, tv must be the most popular media for human beings
today. It plays an important part in our life. No one can deny the advantages
it brings us when it helps us to update news, relax with gameshows, movies or
music. However, it sometimes brings us troubles which affects our life a lot.


Children watch an average of three to
fours hours of television daily. Television can be a powerful influence in
developing value systems and shaping behavior. Unfortunately, much of today's
television programming is violent. Hundreds of studies of the effects of TV
violence on children and teenagers have found that children may become
"unaffected" to the horror of violence and gradually accept violence
as a way to solve problems.


When they see the violent scenes on a
movie, those images affect their mind and make their behaviors worse. They may
treat their friends or their relatives in a violent way. That affects a lot to
their mind when they’re growing up. That’s why Parents should do something
right before things become worse. Here are some solutions:


Parents should pay attention to the
programs their children are watching and watch some with them. Set limits on
the amount of time they spend with the television; consider removing the TV set
from the child's bedroom


When they see
a violent situation, parents can discuss with their child what caused the
character to act in a violent way. They should also point out that this kind of
behavior is not good, not the way adults usually solve their problems.
They can ask their children to talk about other ways the character could have
reacted, or other nonviolent solutions to the character's problem.


It's also a
good idea to make sure your child has a wide variety of free-time activities in
addition to TV, video games, and the Internet. Activities like reading, playing
with friends, and sports can all play a vital part in helping your child
develop a healthy body and mind.





Em chỉ viết được vậy thôi, cứu em với.


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2 Re: Sửa bài viết giùm em on Wed Jan 19, 2011 9:50 pm

Chi_Pheo

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Gì mà khóc lóc quá vậy trời, để anh thử viết giúp xem nào :
(Bài viết mang tính tham khảo, mà thực tế em viết rất ok đấy, chỉ cần học thêm chút techniques là càng ok)

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Nowadays, TV is
said to be the most popular kind of media for human beings since it plays an
important part in our lives. TV helps people keep update with the latest news,
relax with watching game shows, movies or enjoying music videos. That are undeniable
advantages that TV brings to man’s life.





However, in
another hand, watching TV could also come with some drawbacks, which significantly
affects children development.











Regularly, children watch an average of three to fours hours of
television a day. In that case, TV could have a powerful influence in
developing value systems and shaping behavior on a child. Educative programs
from TV like “Staying Home on Sunday: ở nhà chủ nhật nhé, hehe, em có thể thêm
vào ở đây ”may educate the child on how to live orderly, how to manage
themselves and how to behave with elders. Also, some programs like “Singing competition” or “Gameshows” for
children would shape up the sense of art and community in a child. Those
programs on TV would positively bring up the child with many good
characteristics such as loving others, being thoughtful, behaving in good
manners and so on.











Unfortunately, many of today's television programs show violent
scenes on the screen. Hundreds of studies on the effects of TV violence scene
to children and teenagers have showed that children may become
"unaffected" with horror of violence as they see it on a regular
basis on TV and gradually accept violence as a way to solve problems.





When they see the violent scenes in a movie, those images
affect their mind and exert their behaviors in way that make them worse.





They may treat their friends or relatives in a violent way.
That affects a lot to their mind when they grow up. That’s why Parents should
do something right before things become worse.








Here are some solutions:


Parents should pay attention to the programs their children
are watching and watch some with them. Set limits on the amount of time they
spend on the television; consider removing the TV set from the child's bedroom


When they see
a violent situation, parents can discuss with their child what caused the
character to act in such a violent way. They should also point out that this
kind of behavior is not good, not the way adults usually solve their
problems. They can ask their children to talk about other ways the character
could have reacted, or other nonviolent solutions to the character's problem.





It's also a
good idea to make sure that the children have a wide variety of free-time
activities in addition to watching TV, playing video games, surfing the
Internet. Activities like reading, playing with friends, and sports can all
play a vital part in helping your child develop a healthy body and a wholesome mind.



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