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Academic writing practice for IELTS-Task 1-Test 8

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aqua

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My answer:

The table indicates the percentage of rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September between 1985 and 2000.

Six hotels were categorized into three groups based on their star-rating which included 5 star, 4 star and 3 star. Hotel Concorde and Hamilton held the top star-rating, coupled with high occupying rate of 90% and 100% respectively by 1985. Those figures remained unchanged until 1995 when the occupying rates dropped to 30% and 95% with the larger decrease of Hotel Concorde. Hotel Concorde ended the period with an increase in the occupying percentage of more than twofold, standing at 66% while Hamilton’s saw a continuous decline to 70%.

The only four-star listed hotel, The Tower, started the period with the lowest occupying rate (57%) then hit its second peak of 85% by 2000, which was last seen in 1990.

Hotel Olivia, Hapmton’s together with The Continental fell into the last group, where Hampton’s top the list of three-star hotels with steady occupying rate of 90% or above, making it the only hotel whose rooms were 100% occupied at the year 2000.

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Help me to check it out pls. A lot of thanks!!!



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tran_ba_hieu

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Viết cũng hay đấy chứ !

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aqua

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tran_ba_hieu wrote:Viết cũng hay đấy chứ !


423623 Thank you Hieu for reading and for your nice words!!!

It could be even better if you can show me how to improve my writing or you can share your writing here. vmvm

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....Am just wondering if the table you posted here in this exercise is right, Aqua? Just checking...i need to know and see that before I can post anything here....thanks..... 678678

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bluebirdy wrote:....Am just wondering if the table you posted here in this exercise is right, Aqua? Just checking...i need to know and see that before I can post anything here....thanks..... 678678

I love you Oh sorry, I made a mistake when I posted the picture, so I have reposted it. Please check it out.

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